Prequel To The Sequel Intro

Here is my intro tab, if it sounds wrong turn on overdrive to 8.
Listen to song for timing

Drop C#
C#|------------------------------11h12p11-----------------------| 
G#|----------------------9-10-12----------12--------------------| 
 E|--------------------9---------------------11/9---------------| 
 B|-9---9-9-9-9-9-9--9------------------------------------------| 
F#|-7---7-7-7-6-6-7---------------------------------------------| 
C#|-------------------------------------------------------------| 

C#|------------------------------9h10p9-------------------------| 
G#|----------------------7-8-10-----------10--------------------| 
 E|--------------------7----------------------9/7---------------| 
 B|-7---7-7-7-7-7-7--7------------------------------------------| 
F#|-5---5-5-5-4-4-5---------------------------------------------| 
C#|-------------------------------------------------------------| 

I will see what you guys think, than tab the rest.