Of Dust And Nations Intro

This is just the little acoustic part, I was messing around and stumbled on what I
thought sounded pretty accurate. I was in standard, but I'm guessing the song is going
to be the same tuning as the rest of the album, not that you use the low E for this part anyway.
e|-----------------------------------|  
B|--------13-------------------------|  
G|-0h9h10----10-9-10-9p0-9p0-9p0-9p0-|  
D|-----------------------------------|  
A|-----------------------------------|  
E|-----------------------------------|  


or
e|---------------------------------------|  
B|--------13-----------------------------|  
G|-0h9h10----10-9-10-9-10-9-10-9-10-9-10-|  
D|---------------------------------------|  
A|---------------------------------------|  
E|---------------------------------------|  

tell me which one sounds better, or if they both fail.