Friends And Family

hi my name is RENE' VALDIVIEZO,I am 14 years old and this is my first tab.
i think i am the first guy to tab this song so tell me how i did

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INTRO-MAIN RIFF-CHORUS
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UNTIL AFTER HE SAYS
"YOU TAKE A STEP BACK AND YOUR STUCK IN THE QUICKSAND"
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THEN THIS 2X
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